Tuesday, August 4, 2015

Diction Exercise:

Before
  1. We all are ready peak the weeds, prepared the soel, and dobed the hols for the new seeds and flowers.
  2. I think your'd  better keep your mouth shot, or think us some new uses for that furdelizer!
After
  1. We’ve already picked the weeds, prepared the soil, and dug the holes for the new seeds and flowers.
  2. I think you’d better keep your mouth shut, or I’ll think of some new uses for that fertilizer!


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